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11-19-2003, 06:45 PM
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Riley
Oil 16x24"
This is finished, the clients are happy, but I'd like a critique anyway for future reference.
Tha major problem with this one as I see it is the hair on the forehead. The client wanted more than what was on the photo since it has grown since then - she was pretty insistant.
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11-19-2003, 06:46 PM
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It is actually a lot softer than it looks on my monitor here.
I need to rework this image - the contrast is too high or something.
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11-19-2003, 06:57 PM
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This is closer, I think.
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"If you obey all the rules, you'll miss all the fun." - Katherine Hepburn
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11-19-2003, 07:59 PM
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Kim - very nice!
I think her right hand is a little hard to 'read' - but then it was in the reference photo, too. Otherwise, you've really captured her likeness, and the finishing touches -- the little bracelet, the pink bow -- are just charming! I like how you simplified the bracelet and the way you subtly turned up the corners of her mouth to give her a more pleasant expression - but it still looks like her.
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