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Alicia Kornick · 10-09-2002, 11:17 PM

Hi Jeanine,

I definitely like the cropped version, the second one much better. As for the slouch, it doesn't bother me. It obviously shows a man who has played hard and is resting for a bit. What about putting in his polo stick (or whatever they call them) leaning against the bench coming in from the lower left, leading the eye to him. I would also try to put the polo hat on the bench. Like the idea of the horse in the background too that Mike suggested.

10-09-2002, 11:17 PM	#8
Alicia Kornick Juried Member Joined: May 2002 Location: Hammond, LA Posts: 265	Hi Jeanine, I definitely like the cropped version, the second one much better. As for the slouch, it doesn't bother me. It obviously shows a man who has played hard and is resting for a bit. What about putting in his polo stick (or whatever they call them) leaning against the bench coming in from the lower left, leading the eye to him. I would also try to put the polo hat on the bench. Like the idea of the horse in the background too that Mike suggested. __________________ Alicia Kornick [email protected]