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Mai Ly · 10-04-2002, 10:26 AM

Hi, everyone,

I need some comments on my work-in-progress. The painting is done by soft pastels diluted with water on watercolour paper. I am not sure if I like the composition and the rendering of light and shadow for this painting.

This is my second posting. I did not get much response on my first one. I hope to have some more feedback from everyone on this one. I would like to be able to learn from everyone and do better paintings.

This painting is called 'Private Thoughts.'

Thanks,
Mai

10-04-2002, 10:26 AM	#1
Mai Ly Juried Member FT Pro Joined: Sep 2002 Location: Manchester, NH Posts: 135	I really need help so if you look, please comment Hi, everyone, I need some comments on my work-in-progress. The painting is done by soft pastels diluted with water on watercolour paper. I am not sure if I like the composition and the rendering of light and shadow for this painting. This is my second posting. I did not get much response on my first one. I hope to have some more feedback from everyone on this one. I would like to be able to learn from everyone and do better paintings. This painting is called 'Private Thoughts.' Thanks, Mai Attached Images