Let me put it this way,
You orthoganalized the portrait, you took away its perspective.
You still need to work on it i'd say you'd need to punch those darks..
Work more on the skin tones.
Push back the ears that will help with the perspective. And move the cheekbones a bit closer inwards. -> <-
I think the most problemetic also is the postition of his right ear...on your left
The blue is too saturated on his hair.
You probably figured that out on your own by now but hopefully you still have it.
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