[Mike McCarty]

Mike,

Here are some thoughts on the matter:

I'm not particularly bothered by the left of center arrangement, and the lack of some object in the upper right space is a good thing, in my opinion. I think the empty space, in it's own negative way, provides a type of balance.

What would concern me is the lack of space around the subject in general. He's beginning to look a little jammed up in upper left corner. I think you can still achieve your left of center composition while providing more overal space.

And here's a random thought ... I might consider twisting the chair a little bit more to face the viewer. Not a great deal, but just enough to reveal some interest in the design of the back and provide a little more explanation as to what it is.

I like the opened collar and would be tempted to accentuate that a bit more.

I think this could be a good portrait.