Carolyn,
It looks great. I can't really see the strokes to see what has been burnished or to see the layers of color. It looks good from here. The lines of the back keep the painting contained nicely. Out of curiosity:
1. What are the scarf and sleeves done in? (I think they would look less "pasted on" if they were also CP, but it may have been necessary for them to be collage.)
2. What show are you submitting it to?
3. Who is this interesting gentlemen?
4. What paper was used?
5. What brand pencils?
Great work!
Rebecca