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It could be my monitor, but I wonder if the curtain isn't a little too blue and a little too bright? My eyes seem to be drawn to the curtain first and therefore it seems to be upstaging the face. It also seems to be out of color harmony with the rest of the painting. You may want to subdue the curtain slightly. I wonder if introducing some skin tones into it might work, just a thought.
Other then that, I like the portrait alot.
Mary Reilly
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