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Dean:
My opinion, but I think a little trim around the neckline of the garment would bring more detail and interest to the portrait. I would keep it a little subdued so it doesn't compete with the form.
Also, it may just be the scan of the painting, but I might look a little to the edge line of the form below the nose. It looks pretty straight and I think you may want to push it out just a bit more to indicate where the teeth push against the lips and mouth area.
Hope that helps...
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