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Enzie, I visited your page sometimes today. I really liked what I saw. This evening, my time, this painting is in the critique section.
I quite like this painting and especially that you are doing this to help people in need.
I find this pose fascinating and I can see the attraction you have to it, knowing that you have a fascination for Oriental art..
I like what you have done so far. The background fits quite well. The red cloth works as well.
As for the portrait and the actual face it needs some drawing adjustments. I personally would start by re-defining all the shadow shapes of the face in value and actual shape. If you do this you will see where the drawing is off.
My monitor reeds green in the face. If you have the correct color/value you can add pink if you like if the color/value is correct. Can you see what I am saying? Also her skin is smooth even in the hands.
I hope I was able to help.
All the best to you
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