I appreciate your reply, Alex. I get disappointed when I put up something for a critique and there is no response. I'm here to learn.
This was a poor first attempt at trying to do a vignette, and I can say now that as a vignette it does not seem to have succeeded. I tried to put an "S" shape in the background to give it some sort of structure, but did feel at a loss as to what I should do with the arms.
So - here is how it looks if I cut it down in size: one 16 x 20 and the other 14 x 18.
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