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Jeff,
You have done such a fantastic job of suggesting so much without overworking the drawings. I wouldn't worry about going to far with the head in the second drawing without working on the rest. It looks like you've restrained yourself from going too far with any one area. If the drawing is accurate, it wil be easy to start moving down the neck into the shoulders and the rest of the body. Both are sensitive and alive.
One suggestion: near the end of your drawing, look around and see where you can put in a darker value or some harder edges--just a few, carefully placed and economically drawn--that will bring the rest into focus.
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