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Old 06-23-2007, 09:08 AM   #3
John Bruso John Bruso is offline
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Chris, thank you so much for taking time out to give me a good critique! I agree with everything you observed about both weekend paintings. And yes, I knew the source photo of my baby wasn't very good I don't know why I picked it - it was late and I was anxious to paint something right then and there.

There are a lot of issues with my mother's portrait. It is weird, but to me it looks like I painted it from a photograph. I believe I was in a hurry and missed some critical shadows, as you pointed out under the chin and in the scarf. Yes, she was actually wearing the scarf, but I failed to make it look like it fits in the picture. I will go back and re-work those.

Thanks so much.
Mara
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