Thread: The Feather
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Old 06-18-2007, 10:59 AM   #2
Dianne Gardner Dianne Gardner is offline
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I'm bumping this one to the top. I know how it feels to post for critique and no one says anything! I am not an expert but I'll give you my thoughts and hopefully someone else will add to them.

I find this painting has charm. You have painted a story here and its lovely. My only critique is that there is way too much chroma and edges in the foilege. If you softened and muted those, the little girl would pop out and become your focal point.

I love the sunlight you have captured and I like the painting.


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Dianne
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