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Julie, this is a very pleasing composition in terms of color, and it strikes me that it is as much about the yellow wall as it is about the purple camisole. Maybe something about the yellow-violet contrast could lead to a good title. Just a thought.
I agree with Mike's critique, and would also add that a few really definite strokes when putting in the light around the nose might accentuate the focal point. I think that, as it is now, everything is soft and you need just a few light/edge accents.
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