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Julie,
This looks really nice and soft. Maybe just a few things could be tweaked a bit.
Her nose seems to be shadowed a bit much on our right - the lit side. It looks like it should be catching more light. I think if you lighten it up the nose won't look as heavily modeled. Also, the shadowed side under her lip seems to be going a little too dark. As you look to adjust that value you might see that the shape of the lower lip could be adjusted. Also, the shadowed side of her cheek and jaw seem to have been trimmed a bit much and might go a bit fuller. See if you can't find some kind of darker value to place in the inside corner of her left eye to define it a little more. Hard to tell for sure without looking at the copy but I'll offer these few things for you to double check.
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Mike McCarty
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