[Cynthia Daniel]

Is this your first project? Amazing. You've done very well.

Add to the items listed above...at the lower part of the mother's neck, seems there should be at least some slight shadow from the boy's arm. And seems perhaps there's some missing shadow on the left side of her neck. Perhaps check for slight shadows you may have missed overall, but the neck jumps out at me.

The boy's arm looks like it could be softened at the edge and the woman's index finger looks like it needs some tapering or shaping.

I rather like the averted gaze of the boy.