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April,
Sorry, I missed seeing this. It appeals to me because it strikes me as not just a copy of a photo. It has that "something more" quality that makes it a work of art. I can't quite pinpoint how that is--but it as to do with the light, the artist's imprint and interpretation and feeling.
There is an issue with accuracy: you've stretched out the hoizontal dimension of the upper face, thus making the eyes larger and the face wider from temple to temple. It's funny, though, I think this enhances the power of your personal statement. I wouldn't make a case in favor of distortion in general, but in this case it is compelling.
As far as looseness, I do agree that comes naturally. If it is a goal, don't force it, just keep it in mind. Plus, "looseness" in general is not as valuable as that particular quality you have that makes your art unique.
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