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2 months?
I shudder to think of what I was producing at the 2 month stage! (Not too proud of the "2 year stage" for that matter.) You've obivously hit the ground running, Yakov.
The composition is very pleasing. I suspect your background is not nearly as dark as what I'm seeing on my screen. I'm getting a massive dark triangle bounding your figures.
Suggestion. One of the advantages of working from photos is changing things if we want. What would you think of altering the focus of the little boy to have him looking at us?
There is a charm to his distracted line of sight, but you might want to experiment and see which you prefer.
You're doing great. Welcome to a fellow Canadian!
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