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Old 07-15-2006, 08:21 PM   #1
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Hi Piety -

I really like this. Great color, wonderful drawing and painting skills, nice composition.

There is one thing that bothers me and that is her shoulder on our (the viewer's) left. It draws too much attention, in my opinion anyway. Maybe soften that edge more?
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