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Eileen,
I really like the sensitive way you have portrayed this girl. Your brushstrokes and colors support your concept very well, I think.
I agree with Chris that the light in the hair stops rather abruptly.
The skin in the light seems too pale and too flat. I would expect to see more color with some cooler highlights, just to give it more roundness in this area.
Actually (sorry Chris) the eyes are giving me trouble. Maybe it's my eyes, I don't know! But the eye on our right seems to be looking directly at the viewer, while the eye on our left has an ever-so-slight cast to the (our) right.
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