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Old 07-30-2002, 10:25 AM   #2
Renee Price Renee Price is offline
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Hi Linda,

This is very well drawn and proportionate! The hands are done very well. It looks like you have a strong light source coming in from our right. The skin tone seems too cool and pale in the light areas. And the reflected light on your left cheek is almost the same value as the light areas.

I love the colors you've used in the white shirt. I would like to see more of a difference between your left shoulder and the shirt going back. Right now it looks like they are on the same plane. Your left shoulder needs to come forward more.

Good job overall! I hope this helps.

Renee Price
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