Interesting character! Interesting background, too. The expression in the face captures his personality.
The arms look a bit short. His right hand (viewer's left) appears to need more work. It does not explain the finger that is out of view.
Your highlights appear to be a bit cartoonish, around the face and hands. Perhaps just too white, or overused. The same highlight on the upper part of the hands exists on the lower side.
The shadows of the yellow shirt perhaps need a different color than orange as well, to create detail in the shadow.
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