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Andrey, this excellent work! I am not sure if my suggestions would help improve what you already have accomplished. Allow me to suggest but a few things. The clavicles on the woman are a touch sharp everywhere and even at this distance, I think, stand out to much.
Another though comes to mind and that is the distance of the figures and the wall behind them. I would think to push the wall back a touch. You have the wall than the distance of the recliner and then the figures. It seems to me that this distance is not expressed enough.
I hope this helps.
All the best,
mischa
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