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Old 07-02-2005, 11:26 AM   #3
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I agree with Alexandra that this work shows great improvement. Keep it up!

There are two suggestions that I have:

Watch the value changes on the upper right part of the head and be sure that the form still reads like a solid curved shape.

The reflected light under the left side of the chin seems too light.

Good start, though. I look forward to seeing more of your new work.
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