Nice skintones, interesting character.
At first glance it looked as if the right side of his head was missing and I couldn't figure out what that shape was on top of his head at first. I finally got it (guess I need another cup of coffee!) However I think the overall shape of the head would read better if you continued the tone of the background up and around the head to connect on the left side.
You might also want to do some practice on eye shapes and look at some eye anatomy diagrams, just to brush up your skills in that area.
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