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Angela -
I want to compliment you on being able to get such a good start, and at age 18, too! I am not much practiced at giving critiques, but want to start off with some well-deserved compliments: you've done a nice job getting the basic proportions/drawing down. Some nice soft blending in the skin and hair too.
The main thing I see to continue working on is a matter of subtleties. The original has a lot of soft shading. For instance, the mouth is not a single dark line differentiating the top and bottom lip, but a top lip that has differing shades of dark to it that merge with a lighter bottom lip. The hair, too, has this softness. Compare the place in the middle front where the hair and the forehead meet. At the present, your painting makes a much stronger, sharper value contrast than the original.
Since you have the basic drawing down pretty well, this is more a study in subtle value changes. I look forward to seeing it as it progresses.
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