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Old 01-01-2005, 02:40 PM   #5
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Originally Posted by Cindy Procious
Garth, these are very good. I'm glad to see you're not wedded to using flash photography.

You've posted in the unveilings section, which is not for critiques, but since you asked...

Maria is a dynamic composition, and lovely use of color. Very nice.

Isaac is adorable. The one thing that stands out to me, however, is the edge treatment seems to be pretty much the same throughout the painting. You could improve this one by varying the edges more, and in particular, softening a lot of the hard edges.
I was going to critique as well, but then I noticed this was the no-critique unveilings section. I think Cindy's above assessment is good.

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