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Do not, I repeat, do not turn up the corners of her mouth. She is wonderful JUST as she is.
The color is quite lovely and expressive. Her face has that wonderful and indefinable expression of someone who never, ever shops at sales.
Patrizio's painting is quite wonderful as to color as well. I think the blue sky could go from a darker blue on one side or top to give the painting more of a picture plane. The area on his neck could use some editing or simplification.
Your best so far, especially in your fresh use of color.
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