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Beautiful work
Terri, this is absolutely spectacular work, so I offer a very small critique with a considerable amount of trepidation. Please take it for what it is, just one man's opinion. I would love to see the girl's gaze shifted somewhat to her left, as if she were focused on music. As it is, it seems to me as if she were posing rather than playing. I've taken the liberty of doing a hasty and somewhat clumsy alteration in Photoshop to show what I mean. Again, I don't want this to reflect on my enormous admiration for your skills. -- John C.
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