Hi Kimberly!
I love this romantic painting! Your set-up is very similar to this painting:
http://www.williamwhitaker.com/B_HTM...es/Monarch.htm
I cannot paint so beautiful, so I can make only my thoughts: I think the dragon-fly(?) is too big (a bit).
It seems to be ca. 8" in relation to head. (Is it not a dragon-fly, then forget it, please
) My other point is the background, more "nature" would be emphasize the mood. Some stripes ala Chris Saper or sowhat:
http://www.williamwhitaker.com/B_HTM...s/FreshAir.htm