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Old 03-02-2004, 11:24 PM   #17
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Great job, Pat. It has the look of being drawn from life. Just a note about the shoulder line behind the chin. Perhaps a little fill might reduce the tangent here, which also interacts oddly with the line of the neck to the left. The solitary line here is a little unsettling.
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