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Old 03-02-2004, 07:09 PM   #14
Leslie Ficcaglia Leslie Ficcaglia is offline
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Michele, I think it's a lovely painting, and my daughter is also Asian - she's Korean.

My only suggestion might be to add a little more definition to her right nostril, on our left. As it is it seems to become lost in her cheek and it probably makes it look flatter than it really is. I notice that there's plenty of definition on that side of her lips.

Beautiful mood here!

Leslie
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