Renee, I certainly do not even attempt to critique and cannot touch the suggestions given by Karin.I think the advice given by Karin are some of the most down to earth and most useful of all. Personally though I really like what you have started. Drawing is fantastic. Similar to what I start as far as value but mine is even darker in value than yours.
So Karin, I am trying to see what you are saying. I think that I have a problem identifying all the glazing or transparent colors. Can you give me a test or process of learning these so I do not glaze and get dull color.
Patt