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Hi Leslie!
Just taking a quick look at this, it's looking much closer. I think the left side of her face is in about the right place now, with the exception of just the 'corner' of her jaw on our left which seems to be a smidge higher in the reference (at the green dot that the pink arrow is pointing to)... It's the side of her face on our right that just seems a bit wide along most of that edge from her temple down.
The angle of the eye on our right still seems a little off (or maybe it's that the shadows in the reference are so much darker on that eye? and the iris is in shadow on that side). Her eyebrows still seem a little too long too me and maybe could be still softer towards the tips.
Her lips look a little thick near the 'corners' (mostly about even with the ends of where her upper teeth are visible - above and below, if that makes sense). and I think the shadowed interior swoops a little too deeply into the center of her lower lip... Making that curve a little shallower there would make her lower lip just a little fuller at the center and take away some of the sort of undulating effect that it seems to have right now.
Hope that makes sense!
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