Another late night, I post the results. Almost done? Thank you Steve, Jeff, and Chuck for your help. I did pay attention to all your suggestions. I don't know if I should go darker on the left side in shadow. Every time I do it makes him look heavy. Looking at it just this morning, on my screen I think I need to work on the hair a bit more and the texture and tone of the jacket. This piece is a gift for his son, Jack, who is happy with the portrait at this point, so I am thinking it may be finished. Would still like your opinion.
I am hoping my next portrait will be one of Jimmie Arroyo's models, full lips, huge eyes, STRAIGHT hair!!!
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