Jimmie,
This is an excellent portrait. I saw it on Wet Canvas. I think that your limited work time is an advantage. It makes you concentrate on drawing, rather than painting, so you are really mastering it.
But I have one bone to pick, if I may. The part in her hair bothers me. It looks like it's all on one plane, if that makes sense. Like it doesn't recede to the back. Maybe some of the pros here can comment on this.
Lovely work!
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