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Looking good, Bryan. Much improved.
There are two things I'd work on, though. The shadowed side of the neck is catching too much light. It's as bright as the lit side. I find it distracting. In the photo, it goes to nearly black, which would not be appropriate in a painting, but it tells you that this area is as dark as any dark you use elsewhere.
Also, the bridge of the nose is too sharply defined. In the photo, the nose is softly rounded.
You're almost there. Nice work.
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