Thread: Veronica
View Single Post
Old 09-06-2003, 02:25 PM   #9
John Zeissig John Zeissig is offline
Associate Member
 
John Zeissig's Avatar
 
Joined: Sep 2002
Location: Alameda, CA
Posts: 212
Jimmy,

This is a stunning drawing! This is a critique section, so let me get my gripe out of the way first. I think the hair on her left side, where it curls on top of her shoulder, could use a little darkening inside the curl and toward the outer edge. This would emphasize that these areas are receding from the light source.

Having said that, there are a number of remarkable things about this drawing. For me, it has tremendous emotional impact, partly due to the way you
__________________
John Zeissig
[email protected]
home.att.net/~jZeissig
  Reply With Quote