Jimmy,
This is a stunning drawing! This is a critique section, so let me get my gripe out of the way first. I think the hair on her left side, where it curls on top of her shoulder, could use a little darkening inside the curl and toward the outer edge. This would emphasize that these areas are receding from the light source.
Having said that, there are a number of remarkable things about this drawing. For me, it has tremendous emotional impact, partly due to the way you
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