I just found this work Michele. It's very nice. You must realize that part of the appeal of the work is that it is solid. The cools of the group cluster very nicely amid the warms. You cannot do all that everyone suggests without loosing this solidity that is so appealing. Indeed you might want there to be less behind them, the lamp etc might want to be played down-only to enhance (or increase) the existing solidity. The world has plenty of busy fractured paintings already. Yours' looks pretty good to me.
I think this is a pretty sophisticated work. It has a rare quality; CHARM!
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