Ok Michele, you can suck me into these little puzzles every time. I am reminded of a composition that I worked on recently, "Victoria's Flute." Simplification is your best friend.
I tried to do a haircut on the pole, fiddled with a different style drape using the rose color, and repositioned and reshaped the window on the right, and did a slight crop in from our right.
I'm sorry, this is pretty crude, and it may not be an improvement, but I just can't help myself.
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Mike McCarty
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