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Hi Mike,
I think your drawing is quite excellent. One point you can take or leave: The painting is divided into three horizontal bands: grass, water and sky. There is an element of sameness here, the grass band being as wide as the water band etc. If you moved the horizon up a few inches you could get rid of that sameness and let the value of the distant trees gradually run into her hair, thus letting the eye move more easily through the picture.
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