Holly, you've captured very lifelike flesh and excellent skintones. I agree that the flash created some limitations, but the pose is very fresh and warm and the color is quite good.
I find the cropping of the hand on our right to be somewhat awkward, though. Also, because of the strong value difference between the skintones and the fabric the head and arms seem to be floating. Otherwise, it's very nicely rendered, and very "living". Good job!
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