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Old 02-16-2002, 11:08 PM   #4
Margaret Elvin Margaret Elvin is offline
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Debra may as well have spoken for me too. I'm not sure how much I can contribute, but just as an observer, I'd say something feels off...maybe the combination of greens or that there are so many greens. I realize she is pregnant, but even so, she appears to be slouching. One last thing, her face color, at least on my screen, seems to lean to purple.

I like the expression on her face, which is very natural and also appealing. I think I would like her. You captured something about her softness I think. The hair is lovely, as is the upper part of her dress.

I too am curious to see what people on this forum with more experience than I will say. Even tho' I'm not a pro, you may like having 'ordinary mortals' opinions too!

Very nice job!
Margaret
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