Hi Beth,
I like the scarf, It softens the mother and cuts out the large area of black. She also has lost her fierce look and now looks proud and maternal. Well done. I reckon she is finished except I think I would put a sleeve on her left arm.
The other area I think you should revisit is the symmetry of the girl's face and also her face is a bit too light. Nit, nit, nit, pick, pick, pick.
