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Old 04-13-2003, 11:04 AM   #6
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Dear Marta,

The cello is absolutely beautiful! It is well defined and seems solid. Besides the wonderful recommendations you have been given, I would also recommend looking at her chin again and comparing it to your reference. It seems to droop towards our left and I would slightly shave that off or check how the impression of the chin on the hand casts a shadow. Again without a reference photo it's hard to say what needs correcting, but simply looking at it that stood out as being a bit off.

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