Tom,
Yes, I see it now. You're right, the flash has washed out that which I "know" is there.
We are going to have a rainy Florida weekend, so I will spend some early morning time bringing out the turn on the side of his face and at the jaw line. I will also cool down the lights a bit. The photo has warmed them up here, but they could still use lots of work.
Thank you very much for your input.
I loved being "held in the light", too -- what a wonderful feeling.