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Old 01-26-2002, 09:45 AM   #3
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Pam,

Very beautifully painted! I love the softness of it. I agree with Daniel that a little more space on the left would have been good. The main thing for me is I find something a little distracting about the shirt. Maybe someone else can pinpoint what it is for me. Maybe it's pulling my attention too much (the color?). Maybe it's the triangular opening at the bottom. Or perhaps some hint of femininity in the top would resolve this for me? I'm not sure.
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