Philippe,
I think you are aware of the eye thing - it appears to be an intentional distortion, considering your level of skill, which is significant! I like your sketch, and the expression of your line work. You have a style that is powerful and compelling. Pencil sketching like this is rare. Keep it up.
I sketch in public. That is a great way to practice. You could do this with your skill. I could not afford to do my art if it did not pay me.
I could not be a teacher. Students might think they could draw by the end of the term!
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