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Girlfriend's portrait
Joseph,
Lovely, lively, as good as any I have seen. It does not look timid or overworked. I love the movement of the hair.
One tiny thing. The eye on our right needs a little correction. Watch the drawing on the lower lid. The curve is a little off, Watch the drawing of the edge of that eye as it touches the edge of the face, again a tad off. The white on the bottom lid toward the nose is a bit strong and distracting. This is, at least for me, one of the trickiest parts of a 3/4 drawing. Otherwise a fabulous job!
Sincerely,
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