following Steven
it's really hard to follow one of Steven's complete critiques...they are really something. I as usual tend to agree and would add was the head from a seperate photo? I think the lens might have been 35mm and would suggest 50 or 55mm to make the distortion less. With such bright light around the figure the darks sinple can't be so dark. Do a color study in a bright area and you'll see.
By the way...it's good work, I get so busy trying to help I forget to say that sometimes,
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